Here is a wonderful poem. It reminded me of Judy Brown’s poem Fire. There are spaces between the logs where the fire finds additional fuel and adds to the different colours.
Quiet Flame: A Poem about Love. Photo: Umberto Salvagnin, CC BY 2.0, via Flickr.
This poem is inspired by a writing challenge called “Love in Ten Sentences.” Thank you to both Nicole at The Whispering Pen (check out her motivational posts!) and Sylvester at Syl65’s Blog (hello beautiful poems of faith!) for inviting me to participate in the event!
The challenge is to write a poem about love within ten sentences. Then, once complete, pass on the challenge to ten other bloggers. As I wrote my poem “Quiet Flame,” it was tricky to space out the idea I had with ten periods to the poem… but I did it! Here is the poem.
The fire was closer than
I realized, its flames licking my wounds of
Merriment in the rear window.
The glass broke when your hand reached for mine,
As your fingernails hid beneath my weighted palms.
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Thank you for sharing my poem here, Ivon. I am honored.
You are welcome Christy. It is a lovely poem.
IVON— have nominated you for the TEN SENTENCE LOVE POEM CHALLENGE. I’m surprised Christy Birmingham didn’t (maybe she has!).. That is, if you’d like to! See my blog of the above title for details! 🙂
Thank you Jonathan. I will fly over there.
At least you don’t have to worry about reading my handwriting! 😀
I struggle to read my own most days.